Shout by Eva

South Pacific 1958

Could use some editing, so long. Beautiful scenery, somewhat hindered by the strong colour haze used in many scenes. The plot had good elements, but the characters and effusive love could use some foundation. Lt Cable fell hard and fast due to....being in the same room with no other options? Bloody Mary's motives were unclear....she will do all the work and you two can go off and have fun together....very suspicious. One thing I am sure of; I want to get myself some white high waisted shorts!

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